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Positive but Political

For the beginner, screen captures are of beta softwareI was very disappointed to find that the screen captures were done with a pre-release version. These are at times missing elements that are part of the final Communicator 4.5 product.


Same Faces, Different BookAs usual, Amado is very good at providing us with a slice of life and a variety of interesting characters, but the story is a bit too thin in this work. Not up to the level of "Dona Flor" or "Gabriela."
Incidentally, the reference to a Sudbury Horse Classic in the trade reviews for this book are obviously for some other book, apparently an English mystery of the same name. No horses here, except in an incidental way.


Entertaining

Nice tryThere are some nice adventures, too - the monster in one of them will be amusing for those who have played a certain horror game, and the murder mystery is a nice change of pace (though the main villain would not use those kind of methods, i think). The marrige adventure seed looks like its worth developing, too.
Still and all, this is just not a classic. It lacks the finishing touches and, worse, feeling of being part of a greater secret whole that makes a proper Pendragon game.
It is NOT the first book you should buy after the rulebook. However, if your Pendragon libary is otherwise complete, its worth a look.


Slow Down, You Move Too FastHere earliest book, "Our Hearts Were Young and Gay", coauthored with Cornelia Othis Skinner, is a perennial delight, a book to be read and reread, especially when one needs a little cheering up or laughter.
Here later books, written alone, don't have the same poignancy but are still enjoyable. Included in these are "Floating Island" [cruising on a barge in France]; "Forty Plus and Fancy Free" [touring Italy]; "Water, Water Everywhere" [Greece, and barging in England]. The set-up is the same: 6 to 8 close friends travel together, from 2 to 4 weeks. Ms. Kimbrough weaves together gentle observations on human frailities with low-key and non-critical sightseeing.
"Floating Island" is one of her later books, and lacks much of the zing of the earlier ones. The book relates the adventures of a two-week cruise on a barge on the river Shannon in the early 1970s.
I recommend Ms. Kimbrough's earlier books [particularly "Our Hearts were Young and Gay", but also "Forty Plus and Fancy Free"] more than this book, if you are interested in a gentle read.
If you are interested in serious armchair travel, you would do better with any of H. V. Morton's classics ["A Traveller in Rome"; "In the Steps of St. Paul"; etc., recently reissued in paperback].


A timely and deeply philosophical book -- RecommendedPreviously, Thornquist had been suspected in a sixteen-year-old kidnapping case in which the child's body was never found. In the second section of TWISTED ROADS, the victim of the sixteen-year-old crime is at last discovered. Her family struggles with reconciling themselves to the finality of the discovery of their child's body. In the third section, a millionaire forms the vigilante group Warmstorm to rid the world of sexual predators like Thornquist. The forth section proves the horrible consequences of vigilantism.
The four sections of TWISTED ROADS read much like four loosely linked short stories. Unfortunately, TWISTED ROADS falls victim to the flaws of self-publishing, even as it offers powerful food for thought. Ordinarily I do not mention formatting or other technical concerns with a book in my reviews because they do not reflect specifically on the author's writing ability. However, with this self-published novel the uneven margins with an inch and a half at the top of each page is a bit disconcerting, leaving the reader feeling as though the presentation was orchestrated to falsely present a longer book. In addition, unconventional editing choices, such as the use of parenthesis or dashes, may be distracting to readers.
Specifically addressing the content of the novel, the author would have benefited from a writing critique group that focused on "show don't tell" when creating characters and motivation. Much of the book is a series of long paragraphs that describe the events and people, with the unfortunately result of flat characterizations and a lack of tension. Nevertheless, the author presents a timely and deeply philosophical book that examines the conundrums of vigilantism and the flaws of its use. An interesting read, TWISTED ROADS comes recommended.


Worthy Subject Deserves BetterAgainst this backdrop, I had high hopes for Catherine Manegold's book, particularly after hearing her articulate commentary on NPR this past March. I anticipated a scholarly treatment of the Faulkner case and how an institution reconciles its traditions with the demands of contemporary society. In that regard, I was as disappointed in In Glory's Shadow as I was of my alma mater's response to the greatest challenge in its recent history.
A fairly short book to begin with (317 pages excluding the index), less than a third of its pages are devoted directly to Shannon Faulkner. So, obviously, an in-depth analysis of her case is hardly possible. Manegold's would-be social/legal analysis compares poorly, for example, with Jeffrey Toobin's skillful books on the O. J. Simpson trial (The Run of His Life) or the Clinton-Lewinsky affair (A Vast Conspiracy), two recent volumes on other prominent legal cases with contemporary societal implications. Manegold is much more intent on recreating an image of The Citadel as an oppressive institution rather than presenting a balanced treatment of its recent history. She concedes The Citadel no virtues that I could find. Not one.
Instead, Manegold attaches great significance to the fact that The Citadel can trace its history to the establishment of a youth militia to suppress slave uprisings in the antebellum South. She also gravely notes that the Charleston workhouse for unruly slaves had "a strikingly similar design" to the architecture of the modern Citadel. From this distant past, she proposes that a "master-slave" relationship emerged between freshman cadets and upperclassmen at the school, and has been perpetuated at The Citadel up to current times. In reality, The Citadel's fourth-class system as well as its Honor Code owe far more to the model practiced at the national service academies, particularly West Point, than it does to what went on in the antebellum South.
Also troubling is Manegold's manipulation of language and imagery in a way that robs the book of intellectual honesty. Cadets are invariably described as "boys," and not very appealing boys at that. Instead, we read about "a lanky senior with deep scarring left behind by teenage acne," "awkward boys," "bony kneed studies in dark blue," "gawkish clusters," "a tall knob with acne," "a sea of acne." They are variously "pale and silent," "stiff and yellow," "rail thin," "foundering and frightened," or "hollow-cheeked." One could only assume that the kind of individuals The Citadel attracts are wimps who need to prove something to themselves or the world. Faculty are referred to as SCUM (the unfortunate acronym for South Carolina Unorganized Militia, their parent body). The Assistant Commandant is "white-haired and chinless." The emphasis is clearly on using these irrelevancies to create mood and tone rather than dwelling on fact. In other words, mock the appearance or superficial traits, and the reader's sympathies tend to follow. It's a formula that movie directors have been using for years.
Some of Manegold's descriptions border on the homoerotic, which I found puzzling. She notes that "knobs" (referring to freshmen cadets with buzz haircuts) "is a term signifying the tip of a man's penis". (To quote Stephen Breyer, "So what?") She describes hazing where "naked boys with shaved heads and shaking bodies (were) packed into the showers, flesh to flesh." I lived for four years in two different barracks at The Citadel, and never witnessed or heard of a scene like that.
Manegold's thesis that the inmates are running the asylum at The Citadel has some connection with the truth. When I was a cadet, lack of adult supervision in the barracks led to the occasional excesses that could be expected in any system entrusted to eighteen to twenty-one year olds. There's always someone who doesn't know where to draw the line. The idea was captured vividly in Pat Conroy's novel The Lord's of Discipline in the person of the white-trash Cadet Fox (based on a real person, by the way, who was two classes ahead of me). In fact, I found it surprising that Manegold didn't interview Conroy, probably The Citadel's best known contemporary alumnus, and one of its most iconoclastic. But, this is hardly a book that prizes scholarship. The Citadel may have its problems, but make no mistake, In Glory's Shadow is a caricature.
By comparison, Carol Barkalow's very useful 1990 book, In the Men's House, describes with far greater integrity than In Glory's Shadow how women coped in a hostile male domain. Now a major in the U. S. Army, Barkalow tells how she and other women fared as members of the West Point class of 1980, the first to include female cadets.
Revealing saga of modern, gender-based prejudice.
ExcellentI found this to be a wonderful and engrossing book and I am frankly not surprised that most of the negative reviews come from Citadel attendies. In his books The Boo and The Lords of Discipline Pat Conroy (who for years was villified by his alma matter) basically stated that most of those who attended the Citadel thought that it was paradise on earth and "God created it on the eigth day after he rested". Obviously some have problems with criticism of their school and can't handle it. The Citadel has always fascinated me and I was intrigued by this book which I actually read in record time. The book gives a fascinating account of the school, and the history of Charleston.
Yes this book is at times is harsh and does not reflect the school in a good light. But it isn't as if Ms. Minegold is the first to do so. Numerous news organizations among them 60 Minutes have done pieces on the school and their handling of the comming of women. To this date I really don't think that I have read one positive piece on the Citadel which does not make the school into a factory for bullies and sadists. Hopefully one day one graduate (hopefully female) will give a true and balanced acount of the school.
From what I have seen lately it seems as if the school has done some growing up and is truly trying to change their reputation.


Not the same old RIVER.Offutt's memoir not only shows that you can't go home again, but just how difficult it can be thinking you can. He discovers "home is a feeling, nothing more. Home is illusory, like love, then it disappears. Once you leave, you become a stranger" (p. 266). At one point, we find Offutt drinking beer with his old friends. "We lied about the present," he observes, "reminisced about the past, and utterly ignored the future. We repeated ourselves endlessly . . . I was reliving childhood from the other end . . . wishing time had halted twenty-five years ago at the apex of innocence" (pp. 163-4).
Like his other writing, Offutt's memoir will make you laugh, and it will make you cry. Although you may not find any heroes along the way, you will meet folks in this anecdotal memoir as interesting as any of the characters that populate Offutt's short stories. In a distracting way, Offut intertwines his own story with the Holocaust story of his in-laws, Arthur and Irene--my only real criticism of the book. In the end, I favor Offutt's earlier work more than NO HEROES.
G. Merritt
longitude and attitudeLocals who have problems with this book, I have advice: go and be.
Chris is actually doing you a service...
No Heroes Rings TrueI think the book does an excellent job dissecting the harsh truths about the small town he grew up in, returned to, and then evenutally fled. The rural language nuances are right-on, and the people are stright out of the local newspaper. Interwoven into Offutt's own story is the tale of his in-laws, survivors of the holocaust. At first, this parallel tale is distracting and seems jarringly out of place. As one reads more of the book, however, the holocaust tale begins subtly to integrate its themes into Chris's own story. Eventually, this parallel story gives the book its crystalized truth: home is in the heart and mind -- it is not a physical place. Chris Offutt's father-in-law knew that the pre-war Poland he grew up in no longer existed. For him, home was where he made it, and there was no yearning to return to a non-existant "home" of his childhood. To Chris Offutt, home never seemed to be where he was. It took a painful trip to the physical "home" of his boyhood to realize what his father in law already knew: the home of childhood is never returned-to in a spiritual sense; it can only be re-visited in a physical sense. What Chris Offut found -- and what many ex-patriot Kentuckians already knew -- was that eastern Kentucky provides a better memory of home than it does a place to make one. "No Heroes" brings this painful truth home in an elegant, unsparing way. If you like your truth unvarnished, this is where to get it.
In reading some of the other reviews, it seems apparent that the present-day Kentuckians are upset at their portrayal in "No Heroes". This is not surprising. Their reaction is exactly what one would expect of the the people Offutt describes in his book. No mea culpas; no admissions that the education system is a joke; no recognition of the serious economic problems in the region. Their un-reflective defensiveness is exactly why I and people like me have no plans to return.
